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  Hey guys, to finalize my article I decided to share it again with my peers to see if there is anything I could add. After going over the word choices and grammar, I can now confidently say that the research article has been completed. Although it took a lot of time to get it done, there are a lot of new skills and information I learned in the process. Some of the skills that I learned are how to properly do research on a topic, get in touch with people, and most importantly being confident. One skill that I have learned previously but was able to improve on was how to set up an interview, know what questions to ask and overall how to get a conversation going with the person you are interviewing. This article has allowed me to do a lot of self reflection. In the beginning of my article, I shared my experience with social media as an athlete and how it affected my mental health. Being able to connect with many people that also went through something similar I’m not alone in these e...

  Previously, I interviewed soccer player Gabriel Ortiz, with the information he shared I decided to include it in my fourth paragraph because I felt like it would strengthen the point I'm trying to get across. After a while of fixing up the paragraph and making sure that it transitions smoothly, I was finally able to get it done. And now the only thing that is missing is my conclusion. For this paragraph, I felt like I needed to share a message to those that are currently struggling with their mental health because that was the purpose of me doing this research article in the first place. One way I did this is by sharing a message that coach Ochoa shared with me on how athletes can attack these negative comments in social media.  And to finish the paragraph I decided to add my own message and what I learned from this research. The point of this paragraph is to spread awareness to the audience the importance of mental health. And I’ll state the quote coach Ochoa said, “ There'...